hints, allegations and things left unsaid...
Noun
It will be, without a figment of doubt,
an utter disgrace
If what you mean to me, in words,
I try to trace
And yet words; for these are words indeed,
have been put down
Help me; for I know not what to say, or how,
help me invent a noun
an utter disgrace
If what you mean to me, in words,
I try to trace
And yet words; for these are words indeed,
have been put down
Help me; for I know not what to say, or how,
help me invent a noun
8 Comments
While you wait for "suitable" help to arrive, here is something the dictionary threw up (not as in regurgitated, but as in offered)
Main Entry: complement
Part of Speech: noun
Definition: companion
Synonyms: accompaniment, addition, aggregate, augmentation, balance, capacity, completion, correlate, correlative, counterpart, enhancement, enrichment, entirety, filler, finishing touch, pendant, quota, remainder, rest, rounding-off, supplement, total, totality, wholeness
nice poem that undercuts its own writing!
By , at 30.5.05
Neat! You brilliantly saved it from becoming cliched. Nicely put.
By Rajani, at 30.5.05
your lines reminds of a line from a song... "haath se chu ke ise rishton ka ilzaam na do"
By , at 31.5.05
An extremely witty poem Deepak, c'est a la Donne, of the Metaphysicals fame.
By G Shrivastava, at 31.5.05
Thanks everyone :)
By Deepak, at 7.6.05
Well written. I liked the use of the word noun to write a poem around.
By . : A : ., at 9.6.05
Gosh, been a while since I viewed your blog. Didn't realize you'd taken to poetry :-)
By , at 16.6.05
Thanks A!
Well Nish, I have my "poetic" days :-). Am back to prose again.
By Deepak, at 18.6.05
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