To someplace far I want to go
How and where - I still don’t know
And so I watch this world pass by
Time has wings, I don’t; let it fly

:-)

By  G Shrivastava, at 18.1.05  

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Re-punctuated your words. Here's another interpretation, with due apologies:

To someplace,

Far I want to go.
How and where I still don’t know
And so I watch this

World! Pass by!!!

Time has wings

I don’t let it fly

By  Ink Spill, at 19.1.05  

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By  Deepak, at 19.1.05  

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Thanks Geets!

Interesting reinterpretation [Ink Spill]! Punctuation sure matters a lot! (Deleting previous comment - I misspelt your pen name, apologies!)

By  Deepak, at 19.1.05  

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Hi Deepak,
your blog is a true work of art. It is always a pleasure to visit it! And this latest entry...so true so true...

By  phucker, at 19.1.05  

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Thanks TTG! That's a very generous compliment :-)

By  Deepak, at 19.1.05  

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Thanks Rajesh!

By  Deepak, at 20.1.05  

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