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Indolence
To someplace far I want to go
How and where - I still don’t know
And so I watch this world pass by
Time has wings, I don’t; let it fly


posted: 18.1.05

8 Comments

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By Blogger Geetanjali, at 18.1.05  



Re-punctuated your words. Here's another interpretation, with due apologies:

To someplace,

Far I want to go.
How and where I still don’t know
And so I watch this

World! Pass by!!!

Time has wings

I don’t let it fly

By Blogger Ink Spill, at 19.1.05  



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By Blogger Deepak, at 19.1.05  



Thanks Geets!

Interesting reinterpretation [Ink Spill]! Punctuation sure matters a lot! (Deleting previous comment - I misspelt your pen name, apologies!)

By Blogger Deepak, at 19.1.05  



Hi Deepak,
your blog is a true work of art. It is always a pleasure to visit it! And this latest entry...so true so true...

By Blogger phucker, at 19.1.05  



Thanks TTG! That's a very generous compliment :-)

By Blogger Deepak, at 19.1.05  



Nice one - great pic!

Rajesh

By Blogger jhgasuhvkjahklnsdlksnlknmlwvlckn, at 20.1.05  



Thanks Rajesh!

By Blogger Deepak, at 20.1.05  


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